Jolly good show! What a fantastic first part. Like others have already said, I was seriously worried by the first couple of paragraphs. Now I'm thinking who the Other Woman could be and I'm totally hooked. Poor Josh & Donna, being kept apart indefinitely. I't more than time he knocked her up!

I think we may have to kidnap the fic police and force you to post the next part before next week. There must be a Jack Bauer type stunt we can pull off to get hold of the info sooner!