Mmmmh, very clever. I liked your view on Mandy, (also that finally someone took care to explain where the hell she went!) and her relationship with Donna- I did always have the idea they liked each other. This was a very, very neat idea- showing the JD relationship from a semi-outsiders POV who nevertheless understood them so well. And I enjoyed some of your phrasing "her thoughts and half a cup of coffee" especially.

Loved!