Quaggy! I can't believe I missed this when you wrote it. You told me about it the other day and I suspected I had read it and forgot, but now I think this is the first time. You wrote it May 14? I think I was a bit distracted that day. Anyway, it is really nice and exactly what I was talking about when I asked for a "post hawaii pre tomorrow" fic. I still want more, I'm greedy like that, but this was really good.

I liked the last part because when I started to read the paragraph I had gotten confused and thought it was Josh talking. When I realized it was Donna waking him up and saying all that stuff I liked it even better. So many stories have him being such a shmoo and her being the one that has it together. I like it this way and I think it is how it would be. At the end we always saw her being so cold but I bet when they actually got together and she could trust him she got all mushy like that.

I am commenting to your last comment here (which is from may 16!) because I like what you say that they would just enjoy being together because they always did. I think that sums up their whole story for me. The part we didn't get to see, that I still feel a little cheated out of, was just seeing them enjoying being together as much as they always did, but this time being honest about how much they enjoy each other.