ext_10182: Anzo-Berrega Desert (Bright Imperious Line - Zuko/Katara)
ext_10182 ([identity profile] rashaka.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] quaggy 2010-01-30 09:02 am (UTC)

2nd person fic isn't usually to my taste, but I quite enjoyed this. Little things here and there, and I like your whole vision for the future of everyone. Zuko as touring ambassador is a good idea for a fic where Iroh takes the throne--better than having him sit around. I don't think he'd be a good negotiator with regards to trade and stuff (give the boy a secretary for that!), but he could be an excellent cultural ambassador, and it's good politics training.


My favorite thing, though, is the idea of Toph as Bumi's adopted heir. I LOVE LOVE LOVE this idea SO MUCH. It's totally canon now in my brain. Instant fanon. *makes a mental note*


“Don’t think I haven’t considered it,” he replies, darkly and then his eyes widen and he shoots you a panicky look as if he just realized the implications.

I liked this exchange quite a bit!

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