I've read some of your stuff before, but I just recently discovered your LJ so I'm working my way through the whole thing, and I just wanted to say how much I love this one. It's got everything: Continuity (conversation with Toby, an acknowledgment of what Josh's mom might think of this), implied angst, Josh and Donna finding a practical way around a big problem, and the break my heart moment of Josh knowing just what to do for a broken hearted 4 year old because he's been that little boy. Very nice, Quaggy.
Great!