I'm really liking this story. I'm not usually a fan of series but I'm finding myself hoping you make this epic. I want to see the campaign and all that. And the last few paragraphs of this chapter are just lovely. The idea of loyalty to Josh is beautifully explained. And the conversation between Josh and Margaret is spot on. Nice work!
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Date: 2007-04-14 04:40 pm (UTC)