ooh, nicely done Quaggy. You suckered me right in there! Very well written.
I like the cracker jack lines---the combination of Josh being all quippy but obviously so happy. And I like the touch of Ronna being so happy and tackling him. I always liked Ronna, I wanted Josh to lighten upo with her and all of the Santos staffers. Your story gives a nice little glimpse of a more relaxed Josh and a staff with more cameraderie. Everyone happy but poor Amy...
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Date: 2006-06-09 02:00 am (UTC)I like the cracker jack lines---the combination of Josh being all quippy but obviously so happy. And I like the touch of Ronna being so happy and tackling him. I always liked Ronna, I wanted Josh to lighten upo with her and all of the Santos staffers. Your story gives a nice little glimpse of a more relaxed Josh and a staff with more cameraderie. Everyone happy but poor Amy...