I agree with what you're saying. I have never got confused about who was speaking when I was reading one of your fics. You have a clear understanding of what their distinct voices sound like and it shows. I worried that they sounded too much the same in my earlier fics (or maybe they both sounded too much like me.) For this fic I was more concerned about alluding to the action going on without actually have to break the dialogue for discription.
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Date: 2006-10-07 03:45 am (UTC)I agree with what you're saying. I have never got confused about who was speaking when I was reading one of your fics. You have a clear understanding of what their distinct voices sound like and it shows. I worried that they sounded too much the same in my earlier fics (or maybe they both sounded too much like me.) For this fic I was more concerned about alluding to the action going on without actually have to break the dialogue for discription.