quaggy: Josh and Donna looking at each other (Them)
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Title: Destination
Category: Post-ep for Transition 
Rating: PG
Notes: I actually can't believe I finished this one.  I was ready to scrap it more times than I could count. In the end, the solution was to change the format from the Frankenstein experiment in POV I was attempting to something more far more familiar.  Like this fic, I have written five 100 word drabbles that technically can be read separately, but make more sense when read together.  I'm posting it today in honor of [livejournal.com profile] gatsbyfan's birthday!  Feliz cumpleaños, Gatz!!!  (The Spanish will make sense after you read the fic.)


On The Plane

He fell asleep on her before the plane had even taken off, but she didn't mind. It gave her time to read her guidebook. He wanted to take her to Hawaii. It seemed appropriate. But nostalgia wasn't worth losing an entire day to travel when they had precious little time as it was. Besides it's not like spending a week in Puerto Rico was a hardship. The island had a lot going for it, including a four-hour direct flight from Dulles. There's was no law that said you couldn't be practical and romantic at the same time. He had checked.



Crashing

The hotel was lovely. The weather was perfect. They had so much they planned to do starting from the moment they landed, but, in the end, they did none of it. They slept. They did some not-sleeping too. But mostly, they were unconscious for the first forty-eight hours. And by mid-week, most of their ambitious itinerary was abandoned for a more leisurely pace.

He blamed it on jetlag until she reminded him that they were still in the same time zone, not that they had gotten use to being in just one yet. They started calling it "campaign-lag" after that.



At The Beach

They do go to the beach, but only once to say that they did. They both agreed that they aren’t really beach people. She spends most of her time under a large umbrella, slathered in the strongest sun block she could find, while he complains about sand getting into places where sand should never, ever be. They head back after only a few hours to shower and take a nap. That evening, she wore a long sundress, he was in a linen suit and they ate dinner at a nice restaurant overlooking the ocean. That was much more their style.



The Talk

“We wasted so much time,” she sighed. He started to say something, but trailed off. When she turned around, he had that look on his face. The genius look. The one that he'd get after she'd made some stray remark... followed by a demand for a copy of the Antiquities Act and ten minutes with the President.

“I don’t think we have,” he finally said. "If you and I never met in New Hampshire, we would have gotten here anyway. But, instead, I got to share the past decade with you, and I can't think of anything better than that."



Home Again

He thinks that the best part of the entire trip was when they returned to his apartment and collapsed, almost in synchronization, on the facing couches. She had buried her face in one of the pillows and mumbled something about how wonderful it was to be home before passing out completely.

And that was that. From that moment onwards, his apartment was now theirs. A vacation, no matter how nice, can't compare to the joy in the everyday.

But he does decide that he has to revise his opinion of destination weddings. It'd be a nice reason to go back.

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Date: 2010-12-06 03:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aka-gerbil.livejournal.com
That was perfect. Thanks for writing and sharing. *smooches*

Date: 2010-12-06 03:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tuesday-suit.livejournal.com
Yay, you posted! The last one is my favorite - I love the image of Donna passing out on Josh's couch and being home. :-)

Date: 2010-12-06 08:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] elinorigbe.livejournal.com
Wonderful images. I love them in a long sundress and a linen suit: "much more their style."

Date: 2010-12-06 05:07 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] kassandra-w.livejournal.com
Great fanfic as always from you, Quags!

Date: 2010-12-06 08:03 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] caz963.livejournal.com
Yay - Quaggyfic!

There's was no law that said you couldn't be practical and romantic at the same time. He had checked.

... made me giggle.

Nicely done, sweetie!

Date: 2010-12-08 02:55 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] emilita213.livejournal.com
"...I got to share the past decade with you, and I can't think of anything better than that."

Not gonna lie, I swooned at this line. Thanks for sharing all of these!

Date: 2010-12-08 03:18 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] justdreaming88.livejournal.com
That is wonderful, especially the the line about the look on Josh's face.

Yay - love your stories!

Date: 2010-12-08 04:05 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] jhulings.livejournal.com
This is such a "make you feel good" story. I miss J&D. Thanks for keeping the ship going.

Date: 2010-12-08 09:54 am (UTC)
kathyh: (Kathyh WW JD together)
From: [personal profile] kathyh
That was lovely :)

Date: 2010-12-08 11:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ilovehulajosh.livejournal.com
This was posted 3 days ago?
How come I never got a text message to alert me?

You're lucky it was a really nice fic ... is all I can say ;-)

Date: 2010-12-08 09:25 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] ilovehulajosh.livejournal.com
I shouldn't have to tell you these things. You should just know ;-)

And don't ask me why but now I'm thinking that bird in Starbucks should of known he couldn't fly through glass :-(

Date: 2010-12-11 02:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gatsbyfan.livejournal.com
Um, it was 5 days and I missed it.

Text message or email alerts should be required. Ssshesh.

Date: 2010-12-08 01:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] flippet.livejournal.com
That was so sweet. I love every bit of it. &hearts

Date: 2010-12-08 07:31 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sillyg.livejournal.com
That was perfect. I have missed your writing.

Date: 2010-12-08 07:50 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] janejosiane.livejournal.com
Love this! The snapshot style with the drabbles really suits it, it's like glimpses of the vacation. Really sweet.

Date: 2010-12-09 01:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] likeiluvj-d.livejournal.com
Aaawww I love your fics! This was sweet to read and makes me want to watch "Transition."

Date: 2010-12-09 09:24 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] shutterbug-12.livejournal.com
This was a pleasure to see pop up on my list (not to mention I'm a sucker for a good drabble series).

I love that they don't go to Hawaii (I love the nostalgic possibilities myself, but always thought it was a hell of a flight and distance to go when other lovely places were closer). And I agree; nice dinner is more their style, not so much the beach. Love the realism of it, how it's not too sappy, but still cute. I really enjoyed this. <3

Date: 2010-12-11 02:33 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gatsbyfan.livejournal.com
I agree with irish... you need to alert a girl.

These were lovely. I love them.

And that was that. From that moment onwards, his apartment was now theirs.
That seems so them. <3 <3 <3

Now I want to go watch some West Wing.
Edited Date: 2010-12-11 02:34 am (UTC)

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