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The challenge for [profile] tww100 was "Rewind" which meant you could go back and write using any prompts.  This was actually an idea I had when writing another fic.

Title: Stay
Author: Quaggy 
Challenge # 141:  Red
Word Count: 100 

“I need someone who knows difference between when I’m being an ass and when I’m drowning.  I need someone who knows to carry gum when things get tough.  I need someone who won’t back down and kiss my ass every time I bark.”

“You need Donna.”

“Eternally.  But I need her more as my wife than I ever did as my assistant.  And I desperately need an assistant.    There’s no one else who can do what you do.  Stay?”

Words couldn’t make it past the lump in her throat, but her red hair swung from the force of her nodding. 

Date: 2006-08-24 03:51 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] rentypoo.livejournal.com
quaggy, Ginger or Margaret?

Either one. It's sublime. And Donna would be happy too.

Date: 2006-08-24 04:23 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] gatsbyfan.livejournal.com
Margaret would be perfect help for him. I love it. And I love this line even more: Eternally. But I need her more as my wife than I ever did as my assistant

Just perfect.

Date: 2006-08-24 07:29 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] cantbesilent.livejournal.com
Wow, this is wonderful! You are great at painting a picture and telling a story in such a small amount of time! I picture it as Margaret, but I like that you didn't tell us exactly whom. I like to think Margaret just never leaves the West Wing ever.

Great job!

Date: 2006-08-25 04:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] seri-scribble.livejournal.com
Yay! Quaggy drabble!!

I continue to be amazed by how well you convey so much emotion in so few words. Wow. :)

Date: 2006-09-12 07:43 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deelaa.livejournal.com
Just snooping around seeing what I've missed. I love this! The line "difference between when I'm being an ass and when I'm drowning" really got to me. I think it can be really useful for real life too.

Date: 2009-02-05 12:08 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] arysani.livejournal.com
i love all these bits of fic about Margaret staying on. all the reasons for it: because of Josh and Leo, because she really does love them all - they seem to be better than the "because she is the special assistant to the Chief of Staff", even as that role rotated through the original crew. and i kinda love Margaret.

i did enjoy one fic i read where Carol ended up as his assistant - but Margaret is...she's the new Mrs. Landingham - in that way that she's the one that just belongs there.

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